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Writers are generally split into two camps: those who carefully outline their stories and know the ending before they begin, and those who refuse to do so upon the theory that once a character is created he or she will do something interesting. (original)

Writers are generally split into two camps: those who carefully outline their stories and know the ending before they begin, and those who refuse to do so, upon the theory that once a character is created he or she will do something interesting. (revised)

John Grisham. Camino Island (Kindle Locations 1910-1911). Hodder & Stoughton. Kindle Edition.


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